IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 8
8.0
Overall Score
15 Aug 24, 09:02
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The letter effectively addresses all the tasks with clear and coherent ideas. The grammar and vocabulary are strong, though there is room for more complex structures and varied vocabulary to achieve a higher band score.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You are going on a holiday and want to invite your friend. Write a letter to your friend.
Describe your holiday destination.
Explain why you chose this place.
Invite them to join you.
#Holiday Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:160
Paragraphs:7
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Hey John,
I hope you’re doing well! I wanted to let you know that I’ve planned a holiday to Bali, and I would love for you to join me if you can. It’s this beautiful place with stunning beaches, clear blue water, and amazing food. I’ve been dreaming of relaxing on those sandy shores and soaking up the sun for ages.
I chose Bali because it’s the perfect mix of adventure and relaxation. There are plenty of activities like
snorkeling
and hiking, but also quiet spots to just chill out. Plus, I’ve heard the locals are super friendly, and the culture is really fascinating.It would be
awesome
if you could come along. We’d have so much fun exploring together, and it would be a great way to unwind. Let me know
if you’re up for it - I’m sure it’ll be an unforgettable trip!See you soon.
Take care,
Alex