IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 8
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8 (General Training)
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The letter effectively addresses the task with clear and relevant information, demonstrating a strong command of grammar and vocabulary. However, the coherence could be improved by ensuring a smoother transition between ideas and a more structured flow of information.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
Your neighbor is applying to a volunteer program and has asked you for a recommendation letter.
Mention how long you have known your neighbor
Describe their involvement in community activities
Explain why they would be a good fit for the volunteer program
#Recommendation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Good morning;
I am pleased to write this letter of recommendation for my
neighbor
, Galan, who is applying for your volunteer program
. I have known Galan for 16 years, and during this time, I have witnessed their unwavering commitment to our community and their passion for helping others.Galan has been actively involved in various community activities, including
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specific activities, such as organizing local clean-ups, volunteering at food banks, and mentoring youth programs
. Their dedication is evident through the countless hours they invest, consistently showing up with enthusiasm and a positive attitude. For instance, last summer, they led a team in a neighborhood
beautification project, which not only improved the local environment but also brought residents together in a spirit of collaboration. I believe Galan would be an excellent fit for your volunteer program
due to their strong interpersonal skills and genuine desire to make a difference. They have a natural ability to connect with people of all ages and backgrounds, creating an inclusive atmosphere wherever they go. Their reliability and commitment ensure that they follow through on their responsibilities, making them a valuable asset to any team.I wholeheartedly recommend Galan for your volunteer
program
. I am confident that their dedication and positive spirit will greatly benefit your organization and the community you serve.Thank you for considering this application. If you need any further information, please feel free to contact me.
Sincerely,
Paula