IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 8
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8 (General Training)
8.0
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses all tasks with clear and coherent ideas, maintaining a semi-formal tone. Some minor grammatical errors and limited vocabulary variety slightly affect the overall quality.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have recently decided to retire from your job. Write a letter to your close friend announcing your retirement.
Explain why you decided to retire
Share your plans after retirement
Invite your friend to your retirement party
#Retirement Announcement
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:274
Paragraphs:9
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Dear jeronimo
I hope this letter finds you well. I have some big news to share with you—I’ve officially decided to retire! After much thought and consideration, I realized that now feels like the perfect
time
for me to step away from work and start a new chapter of life.The decision to retire wasn’t easy, but it’s been on my mind for a while. I’ve had a fulfilling career, but I think it’s
time
to slow down, focus on my health, and finally dedicate time
to all those things I’ve been putting off. Plus, I’m ready to embrace a more relaxed pace and spend more time
doing what I love.As for my post-retirement plans, I’ve got a few ideas brewing! I’m excited to travel more—there are still so many places I want to explore. I’m also planning to take up a couple of hobbies I’ve been meaning to try, like painting and gardening. And of course, I’m looking forward to catching up with friends like you and enjoying more quality
time
together.Speaking of which, I’d love for you to join me at my retirement party! It’s going to be a small, fun celebration with close friends and family. We’ll have some great food, music, and plenty of laughter. I’d be so happy if you could make it!
Please let me know if you can come. It would mean the world to have you there to celebrate this special moment with me
!
Looking forward to catching up soon.
With love and excitement
santiago