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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8 (General Training)

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The letter effectively addresses all the tasks with clear and concise language, maintaining a formal tone throughout. While the vocabulary is appropriate, a wider range of expressions could enhance the lexical resource score.
Overall score8.0
Grammatical range and accuracy8.0
Lexical resource8.0
Coherence & cohesion8.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors9
Grammatical range and accuracy2
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion2
Task response2

Writing Task

#Insurance Claim
#Formal
Your bicycle was stolen from your garage, and you need to make an insurance claim.
Describe the circumstances of the theft
Mention the model and value of the bicycle
Ask about the steps for filing a claim

Submitted Answer

Words147|Paragraphs7
English:UK English
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to report the theft of my bicycle and to
enquire
about the process for submitting an insurance claim.
The incident occurred on the night of April 8th
, when
my garage was broken into. I had securely locked the bicycle inside, but the thief appears to have forced open the side door, as I found it damaged the next morning. There were no other items missing.
The stolen bicycle is a 2022 Trek FX 3 Disc, matte black in colour, valued at approximately £850. I have attached the purchase receipt and photos for your reference.
Could you please advise me on the next steps for filing a claim? I would appreciate information about any forms I need to complete or documents to provide. I have also reported the theft to the local police and obtained a crime reference number.
Yours faithfully,
Matthew

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