IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8
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IELTS Letter Sample Band 8
8.0
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The update is clear and well-structured, addressing all the required points effectively. The language is appropriate, with a good range of vocabulary and accurate grammar, though slightly more detail could enhance task achievement and coherence further.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 7 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You need to provide an update on your project to the senior management team.
Current status of the project
Major accomplishments
Challenges and mitigation plans
#Project Update
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:142
Paragraphs:8
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Cohesion
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Dear Senior Management Team,
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to provide an update on our ongoing project.
**Current Status**: The project is progressing as planned, with 70% of the milestones achieved. We are on track to meet our deadline.
**Major Accomplishments**: We have successfully completed the initial design phase and the core module development. Additionally, user testing
on
preliminary features has yielded positive feedback, confirming the viability of our approach.**Challenges and Mitigation Plans**: We encountered some challenges with data integration, which caused a minor delay. To mitigate this, we have allocated additional resources and adjusted our timelines to ensure we remain on schedule. Regular team meetings and enhanced communication channels have been established to promptly address any further issues.
Thank you for your continued support. I will keep you updated on our progress.
Best regards,
Alex