IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 8
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8 (General Training)
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13 Aug 24, 09:55
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and addresses all the bullet points effectively. The grammar is accurate, and the vocabulary is varied, but the coherence could be slightly improved by better linking some ideas.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 8 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You are planning a solo trip and have been looking into different travel booking sites. Write a letter to your friend asking for their recommendations and advice.
Mention the destination and type of trip
Ask for their recommendations on travel booking sites
Inquire about any safety tips for solo travelers
#Travel Booking
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Words:161
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Rajesh,
I hope you're doing well! I'm planning a solo trip to Bali next month and could really use your advice. I've been checking out different travel booking sites, but I'm not sure which ones are the most reliable and offer good deals. Since you've done solo travel before, I thought you might have some recommendations.
Could you suggest any booking sites you've used that worked well for you? I'm looking for something that covers both flights and accommodation. Also, since it's my first time
traveling
alone, I'm a bit concerned about safety. Do you have any tips on how to stay safe, especially when exploring new places on my own? I'd really appreciate any advice you can give, especially regarding staying aware of my surroundings and avoiding any potential issues.Thanks so much, and I can't wait to hear your suggestions!
Looking forward to your advice
!
Best,
Mike