IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 8
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8 (General Training)
8.0
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09 Jul 24, 13:22
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and covers all required points with clear and accurate grammar. However, the vocabulary could be more varied, and the coherence could be slightly improved by better linking the sections.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 7 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You are required to provide an update on your project to your funding agency.
Current status of the project
Recent progress made
Upcoming milestones
#Project Update
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:151
Paragraphs:10
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Dear Ms. Smith,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to provide an update on our project, "Renewable Energy Solutions for Rural Communities," funded by Green Future Fund.
The project is on track and progressing as planned. We have completed the initial research phase, collecting valuable data on renewable energy needs in rural East Africa.
Recently, we developed a prototype solar-powered water pump and began preliminary
field testing
, which has shown promising results. We have also held meetings with local communities and officials to align the project with their needs.Our upcoming milestones include refining the prototype based on feedback and conducting user trials in three pilot communities. By the end of next quarter, we aim to finalize the prototype for full-scale implementation.
Thank you for your continued support. I look forward to updating you on our progress.
Best regards,
John Doe
Project Manager
GreenTech Innovations