IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 8
8.0
Overall Score
17 Jul 24, 15:04
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and covers all the required points with appropriate formality. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the vocabulary is suitable, though it could be slightly more diverse. The coherence and cohesion are strong, but minor improvements could be made for a smoother flow.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 6 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have decided to resign from your current job due to a lack of career advancement opportunities. Write a formal resignation letter.
State your resignation intention
Explain the lack of career growth
Indicate your last working day
Thank your employer for the opportunity
#Resignation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:118
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to formally resign from my position as Marketing Coordinator at XYZ Corporation, effective July 31, 2024.
This decision has been driven by the limited career advancement opportunities within the company. Despite my efforts and dedication, I have found it challenging to see a clear path for professional growth here, which is crucial for my long-term career goals.
My last working day will be July 31, 2024. I am committed to ensuring a smooth transition and will assist in any way possible during this period.
Thank you for the opportunity to work at XYZ Corporation. I have appreciated the experience and the support from the team during my tenure.
Sincerely,
Sarah Johnson