IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8
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IELTS Letter Sample Band 8
8.0
Overall Score
09 Jul 24, 14:20
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and addresses all the bullet points effectively. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the vocabulary is appropriate, though it could be slightly more diverse. The coherence and cohesion are strong, but minor improvements could be made for a smoother flow.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager.
Explain why you are interested in the job
Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate
Provide your availability for an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:165
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for a part-time position at your
bookstore
, which I saw in the local newspaper. I am very
interested in this job as I have a passion for books and enjoy helping customers find the perfect read.I have previous experience working in a
bookstore
for two years, where I was responsible for assisting customers, managing inventory, and organizing events. My familiarity with various genres and my customer service skills make me a suitable candidate for this position. Additionally, I am adept at using point-of-sale systems and handling cash transactions efficiently.I am available for an interview at your earliest convenience. I am free on weekdays after 2 PM and all day on weekends.
Please feel free to
contact me at your convenience to schedule a meeting.Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss how I can contribute to your team.
Best regards,
Phillip Smith