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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8 (General Training)
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and addresses all the required points with appropriate formality. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the vocabulary is suitable for the context. However, the letter could benefit from slightly more detailed examples of skills and experiences.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 7 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You have seen a job advertisement for a receptionist at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager.
Mention the job you are applying for
Explain why you are interested in the job
Outline your previous experience and skills relevant to the role
Request an interview
#Job Application
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:173
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Manager,
I am writing to express my interest in the receptionist position advertised at your
hotel
. The opportunity to work at a reputable establishment like yours excites me, as I am passionate about delivering excellent customer service and ensuring a welcoming environment for all guests.I have over two years of experience working as a receptionist in a busy
hotel
, where I honed my skills in managing front desk operations, handling reservations, and addressing guest inquiries with professionalism and efficiency. My ability to communicate clearly, coupled with my attention to detail, ensures that each guest receives the highest level of service. Additionally, I am proficient in using hotel
management software, which I understand is essential for the smooth operation of your front desk.I am enthusiastic about the possibility of contributing to your team and
am
confident that my experience and dedication make me a strong candidate for this role. Could we schedule an interview to discuss how I can contribute to your hotel
?Thank you for considering my application.
Sincerely,
Mike