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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8 (General Training)
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11 Dec 24, 12:29
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The letter effectively addresses all tasks with clear and concise language, demonstrating strong grammatical accuracy and a good range of vocabulary. However, the coherence could be slightly improved by enhancing the logical flow between the explanation of the medical condition and the request for cancellation.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 6 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 2 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You need to cancel your membership at a fitness club due to a medical condition. Write a letter to the club manager.
Inform them about your medical condition
Explain why this requires you to cancel your membership
Request confirmation of the cancellation
#Membership Cancellation
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:176
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Manager Alex,
I am writing to formally request the
cancellation
of my membership at [Fitness Club Name], as I am unable to continue due to a medical
condition.Recently, I have been diagnosed with [specific
medical
condition, e.g., chronic back pain] as confirmed by my doctor. This condition limits my ability to engage in physical activities, particularly those involving strain or exertion, which are central to the fitness programs offered at your club. Unfortunately, my doctor has advised me to discontinue high-impact exercises to prevent further complications and prioritize a tailored rehabilitation plan.Given this situation, I kindly request the
cancellation
of my membership effective [specific date]. I understand that there may be terms regarding cancellations
, but I would appreciate your consideration given the medical
circumstances. I am happy to provide medical
documentation if necessary.I would also like to request a written confirmation of the
cancellation
for my records. Please let me know if there are any additional steps I need to complete.Thank you for your understanding and support.
Yours sincerely,