IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 8

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8 (General Training)

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03 Apr 25, 12:53
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The letter effectively addresses all tasks with clear and concise language, maintaining a semi-formal tone. Minor improvements could be made in sentence variety and vocabulary to enhance the overall quality.
Overall score8.0
Grammatical range and accuracy8.0
Lexical resource8.0
Coherence & cohesion8.0
Task response8.0
Total Errors8
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1

Writing Task

#Baby Shower Invitation
#Informal
You are planning a baby shower for your best friend and want to invite your childhood friend. Write a letter to your childhood friend.
Share the date and time of the baby shower
Describe the activities planned for the event
Ask them to bring a small gift if possible
Mention any special dress code

Submitted Answer

Words179|Paragraphs9
English:UK English
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Dear Joe,
Trust you have been good, it has been ages since we last caught up. I’m writing this letter to inform you about my best friend, Lisa’s baby shower. I’d really like you to come for this event I’m planning.
The party is scheduled for Saturday, 24th April at 3pm. We believe this time is perfect, as it would give time for everyone pulling up to have enough rest from the busy week then show up for a chilled and relaxed evening. It promises to be a memorable evening of fun and so much laughter.
Activities planned for the evening includes parents mind games, baby name and food guessing.
It would be appreciated if you could come along with a small gift, nothing expensive, just to give some examples,
diapers
or plastic baby toys.
Before I forget, the dress code is smart casual with a touch of blue and white.
Let me know if you can make it, we look forward to having you, as this would make us really happy.
Warm Hugs,
Frank

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