IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 8
8.0
Overall Score
16 Aug 24, 10:22
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The letter is well-structured and addresses all the required points clearly. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the vocabulary is appropriate, though it could be slightly more diverse. The coherence and cohesion are strong, but minor improvements could be made for a smoother flow.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have not received the course materials after registering for a course.
Mention your registration details
Explain the importance of the course materials for your preparation
Request an update on when you can expect to receive the materials
#Course Registration
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:135
Paragraphs:7
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Dear
Course
Administrator,I am writing to inform you that I have not yet received the
course
materials
for the Advanced Marketing Strategies course
, which I registered for on August 10, 2024. My registration number is 123243 .The
course
materials
along with study materials
are very crucial for my preparation as they are the primary resources for understanding the key concepts and assignments. Without them, I am unable to effectively engage in the course
and meet the necessary deadlines.Could you please provide me with an update on when I can expect to receive the
materials
? I would appreciate it if you could expedite the process, as I am eager to begin my studies without further delay.Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to your prompt response.
Sincerely,
James Smith