IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 8
8.0
Overall Score
14 Jul 24, 13:00
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses all the tasks with clear and supportive language. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the letter is well-organized, though the vocabulary could be slightly more diverse to enhance the overall impact.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 7 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You heard that a friend is feeling down and you want to cheer them up. Write a letter to your friend.
Express your concern and support
Suggest meeting up for a chat
Offer to do something fun together
#Friend Meeting
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:193
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Alex,
I hope this letter finds you well. I recently heard that you’ve been feeling down, and I wanted to reach out to let you know that I’m here for you. I understand that life can get tough, and I want you to know that you don’t have to go through this alone.
How about we meet up for a chat? Sometimes, talking things over with a friend can make a big difference. We can grab a coffee at our
favorite
café or take a walk in the park. I’m always here to listen and offer my support.Additionally, I thought it might be fun to do something together to lift your spirits. Whether it’s catching a
movie
, trying out a new restaurant, or even planning a weekend getaway, I’m up for anything that might bring a smile to your face. Let’s make some happy memories and take your mind off things for a while.Please let me know when you’re free to meet up. I’m looking forward to spending some quality time with you and helping you feel better.
Take care,
Joshua