IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 8
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8 (General Training)
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The letter effectively addresses all the tasks with clear and appropriate language. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the letter is well-organized. However, the vocabulary could be slightly more varied to enhance the overall impression.
| Overall score | 8.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 8 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You want to invite your neighbor to a baby shower you are organizing for a family member. Write a letter to your neighbor.
Inform them about the date, time, and venue
Explain why you are hosting the baby shower
Ask if they can bring a dessert
#Baby Shower Invitation
#Informal
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Paragraphs:7
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**Dear Mrs. Johnson,**
I hope you're doing well. I am writing to invite you to a baby shower I’m organizing for my sister, Sarah. The event will take place on Saturday, October 5th, at 2:00 PM, and it will be held at my home, 24 Green Street. We would be delighted to have you join us in celebrating this special occasion.
The baby shower is a way to celebrate Sarah’s upcoming baby, which is due in November. It’s her first child, and we are all very excited for her. I thought it would be wonderful to bring together friends and
neighbors
to share in the joy.If it's not too much trouble,
could you please bring a dessert?
Your chocolate cake is always a hit, and I know everyone would love it.I hope you can attend, and I look forward to seeing you there!
Best regards,
Emily