IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Grammar and vocabulary usage need improvement, and the ideas are not well-developed or logically organized.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 37 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language.
Do you agree with this opinion?
#Culture
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:230
Paragraphs:2
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Thesis Statement
people
think that a person
can never understand
a culture
of the country
unless they speak the language
.Understanding
a culture
goes beyond the language
; it involves a deep appreciation of history, traditions, values, and societal norms. While language
is undoubtedly a crucial aspect of cultural understanding, claiming that one can never understand
a culture
without speaking its language
oversimplifies the complexities of cultural exchange. Firstly, cultural practises are done by the people
of it's
own country
. No other people
of another country
can perform well than the people
of it's
own. Rarely, some people
could do it. A person
s/he need
to put the amount of time and effort more than anyone else. Compared to the native's a person
cannot perform better even tho
s/he speaks the country
language
. Secondly, s/he might enjoy the culture
by spectating the performance but
they cannot understand
what's
going on. A person
don't
have a clue about the details of the event going on. If a person
comes to a country
knowing the language
then s/he could have an easy conversation between
the locals. But if they start to study the country
's culture
they cannot do it. Learning a culture
is not easy as learning a language
. You should have a great knowledge
about
it's
history first.