IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
5.0
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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth and clarity in its arguments. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, and coherence and cohesion need improvement for better readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 26 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
While globalisation is often credited with boosting economic growth, it has also been criticized for its impact on small businesses and local cultures.
Discuss how globalisation contributes to economic growth and what impacts it has on local businesses and cultures.
#Globalisation
#Discussion
Submitted Answer
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Words:162
Paragraphs:3
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Thesis Statement
local
business
and cultures
cannot be simply overshaded
. It becomes a concern how local
business
and cultures
need to be counted when we talk about globalisation. Not only it becomes individuals matter, it should be also
highlighted by the government
.Government
needs to focus on finding ways for local
business
and cultures
to strive amidst this modern globalisation. One of the idea
that comes to my head is that government
should provide trainings
for local
business
. The second thing that can be highlighted is to promote more local
business
and cultures
so that it will not be faded by the fast growth of economic of globalisation.In conclusion, I do propose two suggestions on how to help
local
business
and cultures
to strive in the fast growth economic in this globalisation: 1). Government
providing training programs for local
business
and cultures
2). Promoting local
business
and cultures
more.