IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6
IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth in idea development and examples. Grammar and vocabulary usage are adequate but contain errors and lack variety. Coherence and cohesion are maintained but could be improved with better transitions.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 36 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 10 | |
| Lexical resource | 15 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Tourist activities can generate a large amount of waste, which may overwhelm local waste management systems in tourist-heavy areas.
How does tourism lead to increased waste production and what solutions can be implemented to manage and reduce this waste?
#Tourism
#Problem / Solution
Submitted Answer
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Words:297
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
Waste
production is a serious issue around the world. Waste
including plastics, carbon monoxide and many other forms is affecting the environment severly
. Tourist activities have increased in the recent years
to a huge amount and with them arised
the issue of waste
management
that should be dealt with responsibility.Tourism
leads to increased waste
production. People visiting different areas bring
home made
food items, snacks, drinks, sodas, plastic bottles
etcetra
but the issue arises when they do not take the responsibility of throwing away the
waste
properly
instead shows no ethics and etiquettes while visiting the enchanting places.
Studies have
shown
that
tourism
has played a tremendous role in
waste
production around the world and if the
management
of these
waste
materials is not done
properly
it might end up in devastating pollutants that could have
adverse
affect
on the environment .
Missing Linking Devices
waste
management
could be educating the tourists regarding properly
throwing away the waste
material. Waste
management
authorities should properly
check and visit the tourism
places regularly to dump off the waste
. Authorities should appoint their personnels at
the tourism
places to educate and guide people about the disposal of waste
material. Waste taken from the places should be passed through recycling process to use them again
making them environment friendly.Earth's climate is changing rapidly and waste
products
particularly the non degradable
wastes
are playing significant
role in this regard. People should be given proper education and guidance on how to dispose off waste
and help in making the environment more enchanting and peaceful. Goverments
should take immediate and proper measures to deal with waste
produced at the tourists sites. The more cleaner
the enviroment
is the more it will be enchanting and lively for us and future generations.