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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the task but lacks a clear personal opinion and has several grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are affected by unclear transitions and repetitive vocabulary, which limits the overall effectiveness of the argument.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 36 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 6 |
Question
Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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Words:326
Paragraphs:4
Opinion Required
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Thesis Statement
enroll
an individual in any forms of employment specially in modern centuries. This essay
discuss
about the
pros and cons of the university education in accquiring
better jobs
as well as the importance of experience
and expertise in persuing
satisfactory jobs
.University degree is nowadays a basic requirement to get enrolled in any kind of
job
. Persuing
academic
qualification
helps any individual to be prepared for the employment they want to achieve in future days academically with the knowledge they require to perform the particular job
where they are hired. However, academic
skills
excel a person in cognitive skills
but
they may not be able to perform the allocated job
in efficient and effective manner lacking psychomotor skills
.Similarly, on one
hand
, most of the people more often
focuses
on
academic
education and progressively
continues
to achieve the higher degree which is helpful in professional growth such as
minimun
academic
qualification
for the promotion in an organization
where
involved.
On the other hand
, an individual with years
of experience
in a specific field along with the academic
qualification
would be of highly valued by any organization to get the service delivered effectively. In contrast, a
employee with years
of experience
and ability to perform certain
job
without having adequate
level of knowledge might lead to mismatch in service delivery and customer satisfaction and would also be an ethical issue in latter days. For instance, a medical professional with years
of experience
and develop expertise in a certain
skills
without the sufficient knowledge may create the life of a patient in danger.In conclusion,
academic
qualification
, experience
along with the psychomotor skill
and training should go hand
on hand
in order to achieve a common goal in an organization. Thus, for the best job
to get hired, a candidate require
academic
degree with certain years
of experience
on the basis of the field of requirement.