IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

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The essay provides some relevant information but lacks a clear thesis statement and logical flow. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect clarity, while the lack of personal opinion and insufficient development of ideas hinder task achievement.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors21
Grammatical range and accuracy6
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response5

Writing Task

#Food
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Traditional diets are based on long-established eating habits and cultural practices, which are sometimes thought to be healthier or more sustainable.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of adhering to traditional diets in the modern world.

Submitted Answer

Words174|Paragraphs4
English:US English
Global Issues:
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Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Ideas Development
Logical Flow
Paragraph 1 Issues:
Thesis Statement
Traditional
diets
is
scientifically proven as a more beneficial and provable method when it comes to eating
habit
and cultural practices.
Paragraph 2 Issues:
Missing Linking Devices
In a study published in 2011 by students from New York University,
it's
concluded that
traditional
diets
are safe for those who suffering stomach problems and able to reduce 15% weight within 2 weeks for those who are under group age of 17 - 50 years old.
The method would limit the sample to only
eat
two times
/day and the food is consisting of 80% protein and 20% carbohydrate.
Although
traditional
diets
offered subtle benefits, it was not suitable the elders. As people are aging, their metabolism is getting slower. Eating
high protein
food would cause few digestive system issues such as bloated or constipation. The study involved 20 people who fall under 50 years and above, and out of 20, 8 persons suffered from constipation and bloated.
Despite the downside,
traditional
diets
in general are indeed
an established practices
which its benefits would trade off the drawback it has to offer.

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