IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence in some parts. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, and the ideas should be more logically developed and supported with examples.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 37 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Natural landscapes are major attractions in tourism. However, the presence of tourists can threaten the very beauty and integrity of these places.
What impact does tourism have on natural landscapes, and how can tourism be balanced with nature conservation?
#Tourism
#Direct Question
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Words:162
Paragraphs:1
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Thesis Statement
an
region but
with lack of conservation may cause damage on
natural landscapes of that area.This is caused by the activities that we found during visiting natural landscapes. despite
the fact that there are signs that says
dont
litter, we may still find trash
alll over
the place. Therefore
there must be
an
solution for
thus
kind of a
problem.Making natural tourism spot to only be open seasonal would be one of the best
way
to do
it
therefore
nature can heal between the time duration.Although that is not
effecient
looking at economy
point of view
but
i
think
thats
the best way to go for the long term rather than opening it
everyday
and destroying nature
and
perhaps it will
lost
its beauty for only 4 years.
We can make the place open for the best season we can enjoy it
therefore
we still get the maximum money to make.