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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in analysis and examples, affecting task achievement. Grammar and vocabulary are basic, with errors in sentence structure and word choice impacting coherence and readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 36 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Tourism significantly influences global economies, but this influence can sometimes compromise the authenticity of local cultures.
Discuss the impact of tourism on global economies and the authenticity of local cultures.
#Tourism
#Discussion
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Thesis Statement
impacts
on the authenticity of the local
cultures
as number of visitors visit every year to the different
parts of the world in different
countries
.This can vividly
seen
that tourism has
positive
impact
on global economies as there are so many benefits from visitors to the various
countries
, because
they invest from their pockets to get knowledge and to know the history of the
country
or a city.
There is
always a fees
to visit some attractive places or monuments, which helps economies to get money, as well as growth when people
share to
others and people
start visit from various countries
.Local
cultures
also get impacted
from
tourism because masses from various parts of the world visit the
different
parts of the world, which directly put
impact
to
the
local
people
of the
country
when they see
different
kind
of
cultures
from other
countries
.
They start copying to the other cultures
like dressing and lifestyle
which can change the culture
of a country
and its people
,s
lifestyle that is not fruitful for future
of the culture
of a country
.Hence, it can be seen that there is highly positive
impact
on the global
economis
to boost up and get better
growth
but on the other hand side it is bringing
numurous
negative
impacts
for
the precious
local
cultures
, which can lead to the danger for the
cultures
future.