IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay presents a clear opinion but lacks coherence and cohesion, with ideas not fully developed or logically organized. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity and formality is inconsistent.
Overall score | 5.0 | |
Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
Task response | 5.0 |
Total Errors | 40 | |
Grammatical range and accuracy | 16 | |
Lexical resource | 15 | |
Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
Task response | 4 |
Question
Space exploration inspires countless individuals and leads to technological breakthroughs. Nevertheless, many believe that we should focus more on solving economic and social issues on Earth before investing in space.
Do you agree or disagree that solving Earth's problems should come before investing in space exploration?
#Space Exploration
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:277
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
space
exploration must be important for Governments
to invest
more, but i
prefer that The Governments
must pay more
attention to earth
problems
. I strongly agree with this notionTo begin with, there are
many
people
on
every country must deal with problem
that based on economic and social issue
that The Governments
must pay attention to. Firstly, in every country such as
Australia, many
people
keep struggling with their live finance, due to high living costs
and people
not get pay enough. It will be better if the government
can help increase the salary for employees. Last but not least, social issues on these days such as
healthcare unavailability there are still many
region
which can not
provide healthcare facilities. As the result
many
people
who infected by disease can not
get medical aid.However, on these days the
Governments
must focus on how to improve their society and solving the problems
that keep increasing every year. Apart from that, investing
on
space
exploration is also important because of this, people
will gain more
knowledge and can be aware if there
any disaster that came from space
to earth
. Finally, it can improve the technology to become more efficient that can provide the space
explorer to give more
benefit. For example, by using satellite, space
explorer
can predict what will happen to the earth
such as
storm predict and
they can see more
about something that can affect
for earth
.In conclusion,
eventhough
studying about space
is important, i
would rather said
that the government
must invest
more and get focus to
solving the problems
in society before investing
in space