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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth and clarity in its arguments. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, and the essay should be more coherent and cohesive to enhance readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 35 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 15 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Every culture, throughout time, has recorded its history in one way or another.
In what ways can history be passed on to the next generation? Why is history important to society?
#Society
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Thesis Statement
There's
a saying that goes "history
is the past
, the present, and the future." As in recent years
different cultures has
recorded their history
in one way
or another. This essay will examine various ways
history
can be passed
on to the next generation
in addition to the reasons behind its widely spread among the people.On the surface,
history
has been a highly controversial topic in the last few decades, and societies believe that is
important to mention history
as on
of the main elements of the cultlure
. When it comes to representing a certain culture
history
comes first, it identifies one's race as well as indicates the way
a country
develops and the difficulties it went through. If people dont
acknowledge their past
, they might find it hard
to deal with the upcoming laws in the city. One clear example is the
presidents
election that occurs every four years in specific states such as the USA, when it comes to choosing either the past leader or a new one, the public must consider knowing the city's
past
and what were
the the
struggles that they suffered from with a certain president being the leader, one cannot participate in the election unless they are fully aware of the consequences of the practice.
Passing
history
to the next generation is essential for developing the country
and get
to know more about the country
's history
one was born with. It can be passed
in many different way
such as recordings, national celebrations that occurs
every year inb
certain regionsIn conclusion,
history
is an extremely important
topic everyone must consider knowing. and
passing
it to the following generation in order to develop the country
and knbow
mabout
the past
.