IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence in some parts. Grammar and vocabulary usage need improvement, and the essay should have a clearer thesis statement and better logical flow.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 29 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
It is often debated whether higher education is crucial for career success or if practical skills and experience are more important.
Do you agree or disagree that practical skills and experience are more important for career success than higher education?
#Work
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:275
Paragraphs:5
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Thesis Statement
education
is crucial for a career. While it is a commonly held belief that, they should focus on education
and
it's
really important
there is also an argument that, practical skills and experience are more important
. This essay will analyze
this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.On the one hand,
education
is your path to discovering the sciences andEngage in the community.
In other words, education
is your first
window to the world. In addition, you can learn
many things in school such as math
, art, history, sciences, and sports. For example, we all remember how we were so excited when goes to chemical lab.On the other hand, practice, and experience it is significantly
important
to learn
new things. It is also possible to say that it is crucial for education
you
can not
learn
by just watching
you have to practice
. Moreover, many experts in teaching say that if you practice
so well
you will learn
more than those who do not practice
. For instance, if you
take
two students and
take
them exam in mathematics, and you give them the paper of the exam but just the second one who had the right to
practice
when the day of the exam
comes
the second one will have a great mark but the
first
one will not become like the
first
.
In conclusion, there are no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that practices are
important
like education
, so you can not
take
one and leave one, you must take
them both.