IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
6.0
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04 Nov 24, 18:33
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The essay presents a clear opinion but lacks a strong thesis statement and has some grammatical errors. Coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the essay could benefit from more logical flow and varied vocabulary.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
While some argue that cultural projects should receive significant government funding to thrive, others believe these projects should be financially independent.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that government should provide substantial funding for cultural projects?
#Culture
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:238
Paragraphs:1
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Thesis Statement
government
should fund cultural
projects
or not. While some argue that it should be financially independent and others state that government
funding
will help
it thrive. If the government
does not fund cultural
projects
this will cut down a large amount of costs and the money could be used
in better ways such as medical aid. The money that could be used
for cultural
projects
like building a museum will be used
to save someone's life and make their day a little bit better. However, there are many great benefits for cultural
projects
if they receive government
funding
. Cultural
projects
can bring the community closer by setting up festivals and events that show their heritage, keeping it alive for many generations to come. Funding
can help
people all around the world explore new cultures. For example, Thai culture is where people from all around the world come to visit to learn all times of things
such as how to prepare Thai traditional meals. Although funding cultural
projects
may use
a large sum of money it is still beneficial in the long run. It can help
boost tourism and will be able to help
a country rise their economy. therefore
, I agree with the idea that providing funding
for cultural
projects
is a good choice as there are more benefits to it than for cultural
projects
to be financially independent.