IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
6.0
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The essay addresses the task by discussing both advantages and disadvantages, but lacks depth in idea development and examples. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate but contain errors and lack variety, affecting coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 26 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 11 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Development
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Rural development projects aim to improve the quality of life in rural areas by enhancing services and infrastructure.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of rural development projects?
Submitted Answer
Words252|Paragraphs3
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Thesis Statement
has been
developments in the rural
areas
where different projects were given a budget used for the building of infrastructures and better services. It is but fair that
little by little
places away from the city center
are leveling
up and becoming more modern
which leads to many benefits. However, with these changes, downsides cannot be avoided.One evident benefit of the developments seen in the
rural
areas
is that there will be more job opportunities, to
new graduates and even under graduates
. Due to the new and developed infrastructures, employees are needed to man these business, thus giving way to residents to be financially secured once employed. If shopping malls are to be put up in urban areas
, a lot of individuals would no longer need to travel distances and be away from their loved ones. They can just grab the opportunity to apply in this new big
malls in their area
. In addition, tourism will also blossom , making theses rural
areas
famous worldwide. This will attract tourists
which will result to
financial gain of
a certain town.On the other hand, big buildings and other kinds of infrastructures as well as the rise of tourists will add to the pollution of the environment. Not to mention, noise pollution, water pollution and air pollution. And so, careful planning must be done before these developments should take place. A
seemingly idea
of improving the quality of life, might lead to an added dilemma and stress to entities living in rural
areas
.