IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

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01 Apr 25, 00:39
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The essay provides a personal opinion and examples, but it suffers from numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence in some parts. Vocabulary usage is adequate, but the development of ideas and logical flow could be improved for a higher score.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors48
Grammatical range and accuracy13
Lexical resource27
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4

Writing Task

#Culture
#Agree / Disagree
Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language.
Do you agree with this opinion?

Submitted Answer

Words256|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Task Response
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Ideas Development
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Paragraph 1 Issues:
Thesis Statement
There are some individuals who think that the key factors in understanding the
culture
of the
country
is to
know
thier
speech. However, I completely this
agree
with this view.
Arguably, the language of the
country
is not the only
way
in
knowing
thier
cultrure
.
I believe that
food
had
a major factors
in
knowing
the
culture
of the nation, Wether by means of offering or buying
a
food
in a commercial business, street
food
or any location in the
country
that offer
food
that helps you to
know
thier
culture
.
In a global example, China is famous
in
thier
noodles that
reminds
everyone that they have
a cold weather
. As a result of trying
thier
food
is also the best
way
to understand
thier
belief and tradition.
In addition, another
way
to understand
thier
culture
is to listen and observe in
thier
attitude and
behavior
regardless of
thier
gender and identity. For instance, in Japan the
people
are all approachable, friendly, and respectful
what ever
the
country
you
came
from.
Alhough
, not all
people
had the same attitude. I believe that this is the best
way
to interact with them and
undertand
thier
opinion and
culture
.
In conclusion, Although there are some
people
who think that the
best best
way
to
know
the
culture
of the
country
is to
know
thier
language or in other words to speak in whatever the speech they have. I believe that
food
and
behavior
of the
people
in the nation is the most important
factors
in
knowing
thier
cultures

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