IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

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01 Apr 25, 01:01
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The essay provides a clear opinion but lacks coherence and cohesion, with ideas not fully developed or logically connected. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with frequent errors in spelling and sentence structure affecting clarity.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors44
Grammatical range and accuracy10
Lexical resource26
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4

Writing Task

#Culture
#Agree / Disagree
Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language.
Do you agree with this opinion?

Submitted Answer

Words254|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Paragraph 1 Issues:
Thesis Statement
There are some individuals who think that the key factors in
understanding
the
culture
of the nation is to
know
thier
speech. However, I
completely
disagree with this view.
to begin with, the language of the
country
is not the only
way
in
knowing
thier
cultrure
and tradition.
I
believe,
that
food
had
a major factors
in
knowing
the
culture
of the nation,
wether
by means of offering, or buying
a
food
in a commercial business, street
food
or any location in the
country
that
offer
food
that helps you to
know
thier
culture
.
In a global example, China is famous
in
thier
noodles that
reminds
everyone that they have
a cold weather
. As a result of trying
thier
food
is also the best
way
to
understand
thier
belief and tradition.
In addition, another approach to
understand
thier
culture
is to listen and observe in
thier
attitude and
behavior
because not all people are the same . For instance, In Japan all residents are all optimistic, friendly, respectful, genuine, lovely, and approachable
what ever
the
country
you
came
from. Although, not all people had the same attitude. I believe that this is the best
way
to interact, listen and
understand
thier
opinion, tradition, belief,
what ever
the status they have.
In conclusion, Although in some individuals they think that the best
way
to
know
the
culture
of the
country
is to
know
thier
language. I believe that
food
and behaviour of the people in the nation is the most important factor to
understand
thier
culture
.

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