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As the climate crisis continues to evolve, there is ongoing debate about the effectiveness of current policies and whether new strategies are needed.
Discuss whether the current policies for combating climate change are effective and if there is a need for new strategies.
#Climate Change
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climate
change are pressing issue across the globe, hence many countries continously
tackle about the solutions of ongoing policies
and necessary strategies
for combatting climate
change. In this essay, I will disscuss
significant
policies
that may help
to reduce climate
change and a development of strategy
.One of the primary
policies
that most nations trying to do is to keep society posted about the current climate
situation. By providing resources
such as
data, videos, and environmental campaigns, will
make
the society keep informed and teach valuable lessons to take care
our
environment
such as
cutting trees, using too much of electricity, and widely use of factories that may have an adverse in the
sorroundings
.
These events not only people become aware, it also may improve the conditions that we are in.Another
policy
that is a long time
debate is getting rid of using plastics
. According to some researchers, it will take one-hundred years before plastics
may dissapear
in a landfill. Furthermore, this disturbing issue, made
the authority encouraged
of "no plastic
" policy
. For example, the Singaporean government required both citizens and international visitors of using
their own utensils when ordering take-aways
to minimize the use of plastics
. Thus, many locals try to comply.While
policies
are great effort to yield significant
benefits, I believe that there must be an effective strategy
to fully implement the trend. By making
it a law that everyone is required to adhere to the specific rules and a firm consequences
such as
fines, jails
and community services if disobeyed. Moreover, this strategy
will not be a success without the the
lawmakers help
. Furthermore, we can attest significant
improvement on this issue.In conclusion, while
policies
offer significant
benefits to the people helping
them become knowledgeable, helping
them aware of the current condition and avoiding
unneccesary
products that may have a disastrous effect in
the earth. I believe that the Government play
an important role to make
the policy
materialise and this will achieve a great success not just in the place we live in but also to the society.