IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth in task achievement and coherence. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity and formality.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Writing Task
#Government Spending
#Problem / Solution
A lack of transparency in how government funds are spent can lead to inefficiencies and corruption.
What are the problems associated with non-transparent government spending and how can transparency be improved?
Submitted Answer
Words186|Paragraphs2
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Paragraph 1 Issues:
Thesis Statement
transparency
on how the government
spends most of its funds
is causing not only economic inbalance
but also become one of reason
of
high corruption rates. One of the examples that can be associated with the lack of transparency
regarding how the government
spend
its funds
,can be found when by we are obligated to pay taxes. With all the tax that are obligated in our every daily needs, from buying groceries until eating at restaurants, there are no details where our funds
go. Also
another example of non transparency
spent government
funds
, can be found through projects that were planned by the government
such as public facilities. In my homecountry
, due to the lack of transparency
on government
funds
many of the public facilities that were once was a project of the government
to improve it becomes unfinished.However,
transparency
can be improved by the government
to start giving
details about where our funds
are used. For example
it can be sent by emails about the details where our income will go. Wether
it woul
be used for tax or something else.