IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the importance of legal representation and suggests a solution, but it lacks clarity and depth. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, and the essay would benefit from better coherence and more detailed examples.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Access to competent legal representation is a cornerstone of a fair justice system. However, economically disadvantaged individuals often face significant barriers in securing adequate legal aid.
Why is legal representation important for the poor, and how can access to justice be improved for them?
#Criminal Justice
#Direct Question
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:183
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
deligate
helps in a significant way to fair
justice system. However, people with financial problems have serious ban in access to legal help.Missing Linking Devices
essay
I will go through the reasons for the importance of legal representation and ways of improving the availabiity
for
them.Many people face with legal issues in their life that need conscious of legislation to be able to defend their rights. If individuals are not aware of many nuances of the
runnig
acts in a society, they might encounter troubles
. As for many
hwo
are not financially capable to afford for representation in the court, there would be some information left unattended that cause them to be punished for a minor claim severely
or
they do not have any opportunity to mention the exact meaning or the required documents.
Therefore, they would face an inappropriate punishment.Missing Linking Devices
thiat
problem would be preparing a subsidie
for the poor in the court when they need to have a represtative
. If the government supply these money
, poor people will be secured.