IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence in some parts. Grammar and vocabulary usage are adequate but could be improved for better readability and logical flow.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 8 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
International trade offers vast opportunities for businesses but also presents significant challenges, especially due to complex and varied trade regulations across different countries.
What challenges do businesses face due to international trade regulations and how can they effectively navigate these challenges?
#Business & Money
#Problem / Solution
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:317
Paragraphs:10
Task Response
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Ideas Development
Logical Flow
Missing Linking Devices
Thesis Statement
trade
have ushered significant
damage to the businesses
.Missing Linking Devices
significant
numbers charged in importation and exportation in tax and gigantic number of restricted imports to supply chain disruptions and political and economic instability
these regulations
have posed various threats to entities.While these international
trade
regulations
impose
severe threats to organisations
it has also given a rise to the benefits enjoyed by the companies.One of the most pressing issues is the detrimental impact of global
trade
rules on importataion
and exportation taxes. The insane numbers charged on goods
imported contribute to the erosion of profits yielded by local businesses
. This discourages foreign trade
between countries since businesses
are making little to no profits.Additionally, rules on
goods
that are restricted make it impossible for countries to share their riches. For instance, some nations that has
legalized weed cannot trade with weed prohibited regions. Therefore, no trade
relations exist among them. This could lead to significant
damage to the national GDP.Moreover, beyond restrictions, political and economic instability creates challenges to the local
businesses
significant
illy.Missing Linking Devices
imposed
on other states to make impossible for them to trade effectively.Missing Linking Devices
unstable
economy in these targeted territories, posing a major loss in productivity
causing inflation and food shortage.Furthermore, to mitigate these challenges, a concerted effort is required to foster more practicable overseas
trade
regulations
that are favourable to majority of
the companies. For instance, loosening the rules on restricted goods
or minimising tax rates to a reasonable percentage that yield a positive percentage in profits.In conclusion, while foreign
trade
regulations
lead to immense damage to businesses
, it is essential to recognise and address the benefits associated with it. By imposing
goods
restriction policies it
is important to the ecosystem security of countries to ensure no harm is imposed
to its flora and fauna,