IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
6.0
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Overall Feedback
The essay provides a personal opinion and addresses the task, but lacks depth in idea development and examples. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate, but there are some inaccuracies and limited range.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Some believe technology has made our lives too complex, and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
#Technology
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:230
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
technology
is simple, but having the newest gadgets in our lives
makes life
difficult. I disagree that there is only one easy solution, and this writing will go over how technology
has improved our quality of life
People's
lives
have become more complicated due to technology
mainly because it has made people available all the time. In the past, an employee might work from 9 to 5 and then return home to enjoy their private life
, eat dinner, and spend time with their family. That simplicity is largely no longer the case. Once work ends, you can still get email notifications and phone calls from managers or co-workers. The end result is that you can never be fully present in the moment
because work always threatens to pull you back.In essence, it only takes a few clicks to establish a global network and participate in online communication with other users. Since we can get around geographical restrictions and access
a variety of
various websites, this is definitely a more accessible approach for us. As a result, technology
has a positive impact on how we communicate with each other.In conclusion, even though
technology
has both advantages and disadvantages, it is evident that its appearance has improved significantly our lives
, specially our skills to manage complex tasks and participation in social interactions.