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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in argumentation and examples. Grammar and vocabulary are basic, with errors affecting clarity, and coherence and cohesion could be improved with better structuring and linking of ideas.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors24
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource12
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response4

Writing Task

#Culture
#Discussion
Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others believe that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Submitted Answer

Words290|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
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Paragraph 1 Issues:
Thesis Statement
Some 
people
 believe that it is essential to have only one 
language
 as an
international
 
official
 
language
. However, others think that it will make it difficult to identify 
countries
 and can lead to loss of 
culture
. To have a single 
language
, it can be more convenient for everyone to communicate globally. If everyone in this 
world
 is using the 
same
 
language
, there will be no 
unique
 of 
culture
 and no diversity. In my opinion, I think that it is important to have a single 
language
 as an
international
 
official
 
language
.
A single 
language
 as an
international
 
official
 
language
 can help each others to communicate easily. For example, tourists can use the 
same
 
language
 when they travel to many 
countries
 and there will be no issue when they talk to immigration 
officer
 or local 
people
. In addition, a seller can sell products to other 
countries
 faster without any translation required. When the 
people
 around the 
world
 can connect to each others with no 
language
 barrier, it helps 
people
 to do more business and grow their economic.
On the other hand, if everyone in the 
world
 using the 
same
 
language
, there will be no 
unique
 
culture
People
 will start sharing the 
same
 
culture
 based on how their communicating
which
might be loss of the 
country
 identity. It could be 
hard
 to identify whether a person that you are talking to is from because everyone is speaking the 
same
 
language
.
In conclusion, having only one
international
 
official
 
language
 can be more convenient
to
 communicating around the 
world
. But it can cause no 
unique
 of 
culture
 and less diversity due to there is no 
unique
among 
people
 in each 
country
. Therefore, I believe that the one 
official
 
language
 will bring more beneficial in economic.

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