IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in argumentation and contains numerous grammatical errors. Vocabulary is basic, and coherence could be improved with better organization and transitions.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 32 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 20 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Culture
#Discussion
Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others believe that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Submitted Answer
Words275|Paragraphs4
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Paragraph 1 Issues:
Thesis Statement
people
believe that it is essential to have only one language
as an international official language
. However, others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries
and can lead to loss of culture
. To have a single language
, it can be more convinent
for everyone to communicate globally. If everyone in this world
is using the same
languge
, there will be no unique
of culture
and no diversity. In my opinion, I think that it is important to have a single lanauge
as an internation offical
language
because of ealiser
for people
to connect.A single
language
as an international official lanauage
can help each others to communicate easily. For example, tourist can use the
same
language
when they travel in many
countries
and there will be no issue when
they talking
to immigration officer or local
people
, a seller can sell products to other
countries
faster without any translation required.
When the people
around the world
can connect to each others with no language
burden, it helps people
to do business and grow their economic.On the other hand, if everyone in the
world
using the same
language
, there will be no unique
culture
. It could be hard
to identify whether a person that you are talking to are
from becuase
everyone is speaking the same
language
.In conclusion, having only one internation
officia
language
can be more convinent
to communicate
around the world
. But it can cause no unique
of culture
and less diversity since there is no unique
thing among people
in each country
anymore
. Therefore, I believe that the one official language
will bring more beneficial in economic.