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The essay addresses the question but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence in some parts. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied, and the essay would benefit from better organization and clearer thesis statement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 48 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 29 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Single-sex schools, where male and female students are educated separately, are believed to help decrease distractions and increase student performance.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of single-sex schools.
#Education
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Submitted Answer
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Thesis Statement
belive
that studying in Individual-sex
schools
can help to reduce distraction and improve the performance of the students
. Considering the facts, there can be both pros and cons. Studying in Individual-sex
schools
, all the students
are in the same gendre
and they have similler
feelings and thoughts. their
activities, intrests
can be the more or less the same. In that case
there are less
chances that they get distracted by different feelings and thoughts or any other facts. When the students
are not distracted or more focused, their performance also considerably high.Missing Linking Devices
social
comfert
, students
from the single
-sex
schools
react to the society differently. They are always inqusitve
about the other genders
. Specially, students
from girls
schools
always have fear of moving with boys. They tend to distrust people or the other genders
. Most of them reluctant to share
their true feelings. Lack of diversity can lead to social
issues.Further,
oppertunity
to grab new knowladge
for children from individual-sex
schools
are less. If there is
two different genders
, they always share
their ideas and have the oppertunity
understand
the different ways of thinking. Can grab new
knowladge
.
As an example, boys who are intrested
in computers may share
their learnings
while girls might share
something related to cooking.Missing Linking Devices
Single
-sex
school
student
, have issues with social
divesity
and comfert
of reacting to the opposit
genders
.To conclude,
Single
-sex
schools
students
get less distracted and that can help to improve theri
performance, which is an advantage. But I belive
that Single
-sex
schoolshave
more diadvantages
than advantages. Such as social
diversity, new knowladge
, social
comfert
etc.