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The essay addresses the question but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence in some parts. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied, and the essay would benefit from better organization and clearer thesis statement.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response6.0
Total Errors48
Grammatical range and accuracy9
Lexical resource29
Coherence & cohesion6
Task response4
Question
Single-sex schools, where male and female students are educated separately, are believed to help decrease distractions and increase student performance.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of single-sex schools.
#Education
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:288
Paragraphs:5
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Thesis Statement
Some
belive
that studying in Individual-
sex
schools
can help to reduce distraction and improve the performance of the
students
. Considering the facts, there can be both pros and cons. Studying in Individual-
sex
schools
, all the
students
are in the same
gendre
and they have
similler
feelings and thoughts.
their
activities,
intrests
can be the more or less the same.
In that case
there are
less
chances that they get distracted by different feelings and thoughts or any other facts. When the
students
are not distracted or more focused, their performance also considerably high.
Missing Linking Devices
Howerver, when considering the
social
comfert
,
students
from the
single
-
sex
schools
react to the society differently. They are always
inqusitve
about the other
genders
. Specially,
students
from
girls
schools
always have fear of moving with boys. They tend to distrust people or the other
genders
. Most of them reluctant to
share
their true feelings. Lack of diversity can lead to
social
issues.
Further,
oppertunity
to grab new
knowladge
for children from individual-
sex
schools
are less. If there
is
two different
genders
, they always
share
their ideas and have the
oppertunity
understand
the different ways of thinking.
Can grab new
knowladge
.
As an example, boys who are
intrested
in computers may
share
their
learnings
while girls might
share
something related to cooking.
Missing Linking Devices
According to a recent study in Urugua, indicates that, 40% of the
Single
-
sex
school
student
, have issues with
social
divesity
and
comfert
of reacting to the
opposit
genders
.
To conclude,
Single
-
sex
schools
students
get less distracted and that can help to improve
theri
performance, which is an advantage. But
I belive
that
Single
-
sex
schoolshave
more
diadvantages
than advantages. Such as
social
diversity, new
knowladge
,
social
comfert
etc.

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