IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6
IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
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The essay provides a clear opinion and some relevant examples, but it lacks depth in idea development and has several grammatical errors. Improved coherence and a more formal tone would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 24 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Some believe technology has made our lives too complex, and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
#Technology
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:278
Paragraphs:1
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Some believe
technology
has made
our lives
too complex, and the solution is to lead a simpler life
without technology
. I disagree with this statement. We are living in the 21st century. This is the age of science and technology
. In this period of time, we have come so far in the development of technology
. Nowadays, we are fully dependent on technology
. We are used
to technologies
. People
who are not educated enough think technologies
make
our lives
too difficult, because
for using
technology
, we need knowledge about the technology
. Let's
take the example of a computer. For those who have knowledge about computers, they will use
it for many activities that will make
their lives
easy and effortless. However, for those who don't
know how to use
computers, they will think it's
too hard
to use
and blame the technology
. If we
use
technology
for good purposes, it will give us benefits
like:
we can see the internet is the best example of
technology
; we can connect
people
from different places with the help of
technology
; we can learn so many things by
using
the internet; we can see
what's
happening around the world with the help of the internet.
People
who know how to use
it will say technology
has made
huge changes in recent times. The best solution to this is to make
all people
aware of and gain knowledge about the technology
so they can apply it in their daily lives
. In my opinion, people
who know how to use
technology
properly can take many benefits from it, and we don't
need to lead a simpler life
without technology
.