IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5

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The essay provides a basic response to the task but lacks a balanced discussion of both advantages and disadvantages. Grammar and vocabulary are limited, with several errors and informal expressions affecting clarity and coherence.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors24
Grammatical range and accuracy7
Lexical resource8
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response5

Writing Task

#Culture
#Advantage / Disadvantage
In many countries, governments spend significant resources on promoting national culture through festivals, museums, and public television programs.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of governments promoting national culture?

Submitted Answer

Words170|Paragraphs2
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Thesis Statement
Promoting
national
culture
is a beneficial program that
goverment
can do. The advantages
are can
increase the nationality among the people, introduce its
culture
to the world, get exposure to international relations, etc. Through festivals, it will attract
tourists
to come and get to know the
culture
. In the museum, people from other countries can learn the history of the country. Also through local television programs, it will
promote
the
culture
effectively. Public can watch it everywhere for free and enjoy the show.
Besides, I
don't
think there
is
a
disadvatages
of
promoting
national
culture
. Many sectors can increase profit from
tourists
. For instance, in my country, there is famous dance named Kecak dance from Bali. Bali is known for its beauty and one of the most popular
tourists
destination to visit. By
promoting
the traditional dances, the local foods, and the nature, it
could beneficial
for hospitality sectors. Such as the hotels around the destinations could be full-booked by the
tourists
, the locals can sell souvenirs, etc.

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