IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the importance of professional networking but lacks depth and clarity in its arguments. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting readability and coherence.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
Professional networking is key to career development, offering opportunities for mentorship, partnerships, and employment. Effective networking strategies are essential to harness these benefits.
Why is professional networking important, and what are some effective strategies for networking?
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Paragraphs:2
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Thesis Statement
networking
is basically a process to keep our relationship with others that have a same job or profession with us. Professional networking
is important, it can help us with our future. From the start professional networking
can help us know much about things we do for living because we have a lot of people who work with us in this same profession with us. Having a lot of knowledge about things we work on can lead us to a wonderfull
career future. Another reason why it is important because knowing we have a lot of people with us can teach us so much about this profession. Having a great relationship with these people can also bring us some luck. They can tell us a company that open a job application that apparently help us with employment.To get good
networking
with others we need to have a good relationship with our senior or friends, we can also active
in some event near our house, school or work. And we also need to know that we cannot use other
for our own needs, we cannot force others, and we need to give the same feedback as them.