IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
6.0
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The essay provides a clear opinion but lacks detailed examples and depth in argumentation. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate but could benefit from more variety and precision.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 28 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research.
Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
#Government Spending
#Advantage / Disadvantage
Submitted Answer
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Words:153
Paragraphs:2
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Thesis Statement
Private
companies
many times have more motivation in increasing
innovation and efficiency due to competiton
, and the fact that they are profit driven
. Scientific
research
can be expensive to conduct, and for governments
this expense is removed from their budget, which leads to an opportunity cost. When governments
spend on scientific
research
they can't
spend on other things like education and health
which at times might be a bigger priority for a government
. Hoewever
, private
companies
are based on scientific
research
specifically for their products and their motivation can lead to deeper more in depth
research
which is an advantage. Disadvantages
of private
companies
paying for scientific
research
is that they might keep private
information, and the research
might be less regulated in order to support a
companies
objective.I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
, because
I think governments
should focus on other factors rather than scientific
research
for a business.