IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks coherence in some parts. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied, and the ideas need better development and support.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 37 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 14 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Online education platforms can sometimes struggle with ensuring academic integrity, with issues such as plagiarism and cheating becoming more prevalent.
Explain the problems related to academic integrity in online education and propose measures to combat these issues.
#Online Education
#Problem / Solution
Submitted Answer
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Words:271
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
nowdays
. The academic integrity is being affected due online
education platforms as might generate cheating more frequently. In this essay, I will exposed
the problems such as easiest information access and lassy
behavoir
in students
continuing with the actions to combat this situation.Actually technology provides
a day-to-day facilities
, including educational areas where
students
can
use
this tool to enrich their learning process and have
an easy access
to information that
used
to be only
on
libraries and from thousand of different
relying
authors.
Consequently, the time invested to create a high quality of educational content from their own have
decreased
provoking low standards and mediocrity as most of
students
preferred copy and paste from online
resources rather to think and create new content. Aditionally
, leisure time preferences are also a continue issue while faster lacking educational production is, more free time students
have to spend in
their hobbies.For those
reasons
actions needs to be taken, as online
platforms are a free resource for students
, proffesors
also have access to them in order to filter and confront each student
work using
online
tools created specifically to avoid cheating. There are online
sites teachers can use
to submit essays, articles, documents, and so on while an algorithm detects paraprashing
, copy-paste statements and any plagiarism.In
conlusion
, online
platforms are being used
by students
as a porpuse
to improve
their knowledge
although most of them chose to take advantage of the situation. Educators can also use
the technology to ensure the quality, avoid the plagiarism and cheating benefiting the same tool student
have.