IELTS Essay Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay presents a clear opinion but lacks coherence and cohesion, with ideas not fully developed or logically connected. Grammar and vocabulary usage are limited, with frequent errors affecting clarity and formality is inconsistent.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 22 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
While public transport can sometimes pose safety and security concerns, personal vehicles offer more control and perceived safety to their users.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that the perceived safety of personal vehicles makes them preferable to public transport?
#Public Transport
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Thesis Statement
People
have different views about whether or not public
transportation
can be safer then
the personal
vehicles. Although some people
said that individual vehicles is more reliable as it can control by personal
, I believe that public
transportation
can lead us to a safer life especially
when it comes to stable qualification.Firstly, share mobility can avoid some emergency happen on road since they usually have well-training divers. The company operating the mobility select
driver
through interview and resume, making sure they have good ability on driving. Furthermore, some company support driver
to do regular health check, avoiding emergency happen due to personal
reason. On the other hand, Individual driver
do not have to report their personal
condition, which means that it is more likely to ignore the sign of their health condition, end up causing car accident.Secondly,
public
transportation
often offer
a stable quality by rotating shifts, giving driver
resonable
holidays to rest. Drivers
do not need to work everyday
since there are many drivers
in one company. Namely, they can have good rest, minimizing the chance of doze on road and make sure passengers arrived their destination safely. In comparison, personal
driver
usally
hard
to find another people
to drive if they were too tired, which increase the dangerous while they are on the way home.Therefore, I agree that most
people
public
concern about the safety of personal
vehicles and prefers to take public
transportation
. To avoid risk and unstable quality, people
tend to use public
transportation
nowadays.