IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 6
IELTS Essay Sample Band 6
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The essay addresses the effects of climate change on agriculture and proposes some solutions, but lacks depth and detailed examples. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate but could be more varied and precise. Coherence and cohesion need improvement for better readability.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Climate change has profound effects on agriculture, threatening food security and farmer livelihoods.
Examine the effects of climate change on agriculture and propose solutions to protect and enhance agricultural productivity.
#Climate Change
#Problem / Solution
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started
to appear in the vast majority of countries around the world. Also, it has shown some dangerous effects on agriculture, food supply, and farmer's lives. Recent research has shown that more than half of the agricultural lands worldwide can't
be used for human purposes after 10 years
. Although there isn't
any indicator of positive change in the climate, scientists have started
to innovate some solutions to protect and improve productivity. In this article, I will show you some of these innovations.Firstly, climate change is very noticeable in
many
areas like; Europe, part of Asia, South America, and North America these days. Many
years
ago, it started
with a bit of an increase in the temperature. But nowadays
the problem has begun to enlarge more and more because big
parts of the green lands have been burned in Canada and European countries due to global warming. Some rivers have vanished because of the hot weather there. Therefore, all these reasons would affect the framing and dates of harvesting. However, the rains
have
decreased overall. The most dangerous effect is that it has affected the seasons of the year
for instance; last year
summer was longer than winter and there were not many
rainy days, so this will directly affect agriculture as well.As a temporary solution, scientists are planning to build
big
rooms, where we can control the weather inside, as well as they started
to use the underground water for both agricultural and other human uses. In Europe, they started
to build those big
rooms with big
support from governments. In addition, many
states in the USA began to use a considerable amount of chemical elements in agriculture to enhance productivity.Missing Linking Devices
can't
face this issue unit we become one hand. We will find solutions together.