IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the topic but lacks depth and clarity in its arguments. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with noticeable errors, and the coherence and cohesion need improvement for better readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
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| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 36 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Climate change has profound effects on agriculture, threatening food security and farmer livelihoods.
Examine the effects of climate change on agriculture and propose solutions to protect and enhance agricultural productivity.
#Climate Change
#Problem / Solution
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started
to appear in the vast majority of countries around the world. Also, it has shown some dangerous effects on agriculture, food supply and farmers living. A recent research has shown that more
half
of the agricultural lands around the world, can be used for human purposes after 10
years
.Although there
isn't
any indicator of positive change in the climate, scientists
started
to innovate some solutions to protect and improve the productivity.
In this article, I am going to show you some of these innovations.Firstly, the climate change is very noticeable in; Europe, part of Asia, South America and North America these days. Many
years
ago, it started
with a bit
increase in the tempereture
. But nowadays
the problem has begun to enlarge more and more, because
big
parts of the green lands has
been burned in Canada and European countries due to the global warming. Some rivers has
vanished because of the hot weather there.Therefore, all these reasons would affect on the framing and dates of harvesting. However, the rains
have
decreased overall. And the most dangerous effect is that, it has affected on the seasons of the
year
for
instance; the last
year
summer was longer than winter and there were not many rainy days, so this will directly
affects
on the agriculture as well.
As a
temporare
solution, scientists are planning to build big
rooms, where we can control the weather inside, as well as they started
to use the underground water in both agricutural
and other human uses. In Europe, they started
to build those big
rooms with a big
support from governments. In addition, many states in USA
began to use considerable amount of chimical
elements in the agricuture
to enhance the productivity.Missing Linking Devices
can't
face this issue unit
we become one hand. We will find solutions together.