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IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay provides a personal opinion but lacks clarity and coherence in its argumentation. Grammatical errors and limited vocabulary usage affect the overall readability and task achievement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 10 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
In recent years, organic foods have gained popularity due to their perceived health benefits. However, they often come with a higher price tag compared to non-organic options.
Do you agree or disagree that the benefits of organic foods justify their higher cost?
#Food
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Thesis Statement
Organic
foods
have become popular in society over the past few years. A lot of advantages can be gained from consuming them, and they also
easy to find since there are various different types of organic
foods
. They can also
easily be found in grocery stores around us. Although organic
foods
cost more than the non-organic
ones, people
often tend to just buy them anyway.It seems clear if
organic
foods
are more expensive
since they were produced with a high-quality of ingredients. They also
follow some strict rules before they can be consumed by people
. This higher price can also
caused
by the foods
are exported from another country that specialize on organic
food
products
. For example, Australia which often sends its fruits, grains, meats, and other organic
products
to Indonesia.Some may disagree about higher cost of
organic
foods
would justify its quality, some products
remain to be costly, perhaps because
the brand
is popular. This leads people
to assume that the brand
is confident to increase their product
's price because
of people
's trust on
the brand
.In conclusion, I would still agree that the
organic
foods
are
more expensive
than the other due to
its
quality,
despite of
its
brand
is popular or not, We
actually can
take some advantages of
brand
's ratings
,
because
it can be one of the
filter
whether the
product
is trustworthy or a scam.
Thus, based on several quotes that said if healthy is expensive, I agree because
it is worth for my own well-being.