IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5.5
5.5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth in argumentation and examples. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting clarity and coherence.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 35 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 13 | |
| Lexical resource | 15 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
In recent years, the rise of digital technology has revolutionized the educational sector, leading to the emergence of online learning platforms that compete with traditional classroom settings. While some argue that traditional education systems are indispensable, others believe that online learning environments can offer comparable, if not superior, educational outcomes.
To what extent do you agree or disagree that online education can effectively replace traditional education?
#Education
#Agree / Disagree
Submitted Answer
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Words:252
Paragraphs:4
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Thesis Statement
Online
education
has become popular in the recent years
. Covid
lead to the need of online
education
while keeping the security of health. While online
education
came into trend in the recent years
but
in my opinion it cannot replace traditional education
. Online
education
is thought to offer comparable educational outcomes but dose
not help in preparing people for professional
environment and market place
.Online
education
is not favourable and engaging in terms of educating the people. It has been seen in the studies that students
who graduated at the time of Covid
after taking online
classes and academies failed in the professional
setup. Students
taking online
classes are non serious
about there
attendance, the engagment
in the class and test markups. While teachers make an effort to communicate the lessons online effectively
still it becomes impossible to deal in such situations.Online
education
can be tricky in terms of resources that must be available to avail this opportunity. Studies have shown that 8 out of 10 students
are unable to avail the opportunity of online
eductaion
because of limited resources of internet connections, laptops, PCs, headphones etc,.
While traditional education
has its own disadvantages but online
education
seems to be a non
professional
educational setup.Tradional
education
allows people an engaing
environment to educate themselves as well as harness the environment more appropriately. Online
education
may seem to be
more convinent
but
it does not offer the enviroment
that is feasible and needed to allow students
to work in professional
environment.