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The essay addresses the task but lacks depth in discussing the economic viability for educational providers. Grammar and vocabulary usage are limited, with frequent errors affecting clarity. Improved coherence and cohesion would enhance readability.

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Grammatical range and accuracy	4.0
Lexical resource	5.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	5.0

Writing Task

#Online Education

#Discussion

Online education is often considered more affordable for students, but the economic viability for schools and universities offering these programs is still under debate.

Discuss the affordability of online education for students and its economic viability for educational providers.

Submitted Answer

Words344|Paragraphs4

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Paragraph 1 Issues:

Thesis Statement

Online classes for the

school

going students

more beneficial as its need no

transporation

fees

also

contain

flexible hours at

home

and

beside that

it is

also

be very cheap for the

childrens

But, on the other

hand

the college and

school

will not be

benifit

from providing these programs as they

need

to invest in the technology which will cost lots of funding with the support of government funding

and

it will

also

reduce the

tution

fees

The virtual learning has many advantages for learners. Firstly, the

canditates

does

not have to go to

school

to attend the

class

thus, required no

transporattion

fees

for them. Another positive point is the flexibility of time at

home

like any day they can

attent

even

bad weather

outside

they can attend it within

home

without getting worried to

step

out of

home

. Moving ahead, one of the main pro is cheap

tutuion

fees

which means every

participants

irrespective of the background can give a shot to this distant learning and can study and learn well.

Providing these E- learning to the learns for the educational providers is tough for them for various reasons.

First

and foremost reason behind is

investing

in the technology will cost

alot

to the university which

required

lots of fund raise and

also

need

lots of time to make it successful.

Another striking reason is that the

school

is lacking funding from government whish is again a prime issue as the owners of the educational institutional

need

a big budget to implement this technology into the institute and even after implementing this programs the

school

will be in loss.

As, it will reduce the

tutuion

fees

which will be not in favour of the college.

To recapitulate, digital learning contain both pros and cons, pros for the learning students and cons for the educational providers. In my opinion, providing education from

home

through online classes is good and

need

considered

as it will help the students in many ways and make a big impact in the future.

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Total Errors	42
Grammatical range and accuracy	16
Lexical resource	17
Coherence & cohesion	5
Task response	4