IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks depth and clarity in its arguments. Grammar and vocabulary usage are basic, with several errors affecting readability and coherence.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
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| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
Nuclear energy is considered a significant alternative to fossil fuels for electricity generation. It is hailed for its efficiency but also criticized for potential risks and radioactive waste management.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using nuclear energy from an environmental perspective.
#Environment
#Advantage / Disadvantage
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Thesis Statement
fuels
for generating electricity. Many
people considered this energy
because of the efficiency it produced
while others criticized this energy
for potential risks and radioactive waste management. I agree with the statement with the positive and negative side effects it has from environmental view.The main advantage of using nuclear
energy
is robust and can be used for longer period of times without any interruption to generate electricity. On the other hand, it is proven by researchers that fossil fuels
has
a certain lifetime which gets decomposed into soil after certain usage which has huge
impact on environment
. Due to this reason
many
countries are considering nuclear energy
as their reliable electric source. Moreover, this energy
needs less manpower and manufacturing costs
which in turn is profitable for low economical countries.Although, this
energy
has many
positive outcomes but people believe there are many
negative side effects which is
impacting the environment world-wide. Researchers claim that these
energy
when decomposed produces a lot of radioactive waste which impacts air and cause
breathing problems. They also believe that it has some major risks to environment such as depletion of ozone layer which is very important
to protect us from sunlight rays. These are some major claims
but with fossil fuels
it is proven that it impacts human body, animals, air, water and soil.Finally, the main reason why every country in the world use nuclear
energy
even with the potential effects is the advantages it has over the fossil fuels
.