IELTS Writing Task 2 Sample Band 5
IELTS Essay Sample Band 5
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The essay addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Grammar and vocabulary need improvement, and the essay should be more structured with clear arguments and examples.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
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| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
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Question
A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives.
Do you agree that living in the computer age has more advantages than disadvantages? Describe the positive and negative impacts of technology on our lives and give your opinion.
#Technology
#Advantage / Disadvantage
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Thesis Statement
technology
has been growing among people
worldwide globally. The technology
have
made
the human life
more
easier
and luxurious as it plays a big vital role in our lives
.It is evident that almost all of the
peolpe
of all age kind are fully dependent
to technology
as the sites of science and technology
is skyrocketing by introducing various sites and facilites
. Moreover, we can see that technology
have been facililated
peoples
by different means as technology
saves the precious time of we beings
; it makes
our work faster
by assuring precise accuracy. Technology
have
changed the whole world into a global village. The best example of technology
is social sites as facebook
, the facebook
has made
life
more
easier
and now all the people
are fully dependent
on it. In
past
we should wait for
a months
to send information or letter to our closed ones as there were no
gurantee
that the
reciever
will get it but in present context, the
situtaion
has been changed we can easily send message as we can easily be updated what is going in the whole world.
Despite the fact that
technology
have
made
our life
easier
still there are some drawbacks of people
being fully dependent
on technology
. In modern era all the things are being replaced by technology
, people
are becoming more lazy and less creative. They are being dependent
on technology
for each and every step of their life
. There is no close relation between people
as technology
have made
the whole eorld
easier
.As we are well aware that, each and every
things
on the universe ha both advantages and disadvantages. Likewese
this, technology
has also ambivalence and
we should wisely use
it to make
it worth using
.overall we should precisely
use
technology
to makes
it use
fruitfull
.